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in literacy, we are writing poems and sending them to another school in hamilton.
We wrote our poem on a doc after we had finished we showed the teacher, he gave us a card to write it on that will be sent to someone in hamilton
This is the poem that I am sending.
6-word sentences
The rocky path to the house
Trying not to trip over them
My friend watching me fall over
Dreaming of getting my food today
Going to the fridge to fill me
I remember how hungry I am
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