Friday, March 6, 2020
Essay
Hello bloggers,
In literacy, we are writing essays
My essay is about food waste and how you can stop food waste. did you know that we waste $1.17 billion on food that gets wasted that's a lot!
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Hi sienna
ReplyDeleteI like how there is a lot of words, it shows you have put lots of effort into your essay! I agree that people shouldnt waste so much food and water. To improve you could make subtitles. It helps the reader to understand what the paragraph is about! Bye for now!