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Wednesday, April 22, 2020

Online school Literacy

Hey guys,
Today we got given the task to write 3-4 paragraphs about what we would do if the world was going to end.
Here is mine

If the world was going to end
I would spend the day with people who are important to me like my family and my friends. First I would go out with my family for every meal of the day Breakfast, Lunch and Dinner. We would go to Maccas for breakfast. After breakfast, we would go for a walk in town we would stop at Margaret Mahy park for a bit, after that we would go to Rollicking Gelato for some ice cream.


After that, we would go and watch a movie and because this was going to be our last movie we would have to make sure it was a good and enjoyable one for all of us. Then we would go and have lunch at Mugen. And after we have lunch we would go visit some of our family and friends

Before the day ends we would go for a walk on the beach and watch the sunset and lastly for dinner we would go to one of our family's favorite restaurant Tony’s. And to make it even more fun and special I would invite our whole family to come.

That is what I would do if the world was going to end

Is there anything you think I could do to change it or make it better?


1 comment:

  1. Hi Sienna, well done, you have been completing some amazing work. I hope you are enjoying term 2 online so far and all is going well. I love your piece of writing about what you would do if the world was going to end, it sounds pretty perfect! I would definitely want to eat out for every meal as well and share the time with all the people that are close to me. Watching the sunset at the beach before a delicious meal at Tony's sounds like a perfect way to end the day. Keep up the awesome work! Caitlin :)

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